5/13/06

Come back to me

Come back to me dear,

You are so far, yet near.

You are the best part of my life

I wish you would be my wife.

Its been six years since we met

And you haven’t loved me back yet.

I am sorry dear, because I am no poet

To express my love with great poems.

All I know is that I love you

And my feelings are very true

Even if you hate me, and don’t want to see my face

Just lie that you love me, and show some grace.

All I want is to be with you,

I want to laugh when you laugh,

And cry when you cry,

Without you I will definitely die.

I may not be a perfect man,

But I definitely ,I will show you that I can.

Come to me, my darling, be my better half

Even if I cry, I will make you laugh.

For others, you are just a pretty girl, but to me , you are my life.

I just want you to be my loving wife.

So , don’t say no and make me sad.

Without you, my life is bad.

Don’t think that I will forget you, no never!

Because I will remember you for ever and ever.

Even if you ignore me, I will love you.

Because I love you as if you are god.

SO do me a favor, either accept my love

Or kill me, but don’t torture me.

I don’t want to lose you, and if I do

That will be the time when I die.

And even if I live, I will be a zombie

Whose life has been plundered.

So, come back to me , my future wife.

Because I will treat you as my life and not just as a wife.


15 Comments:

At 1:16 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

asvin,

please understand that i cannot do as you want me to, i have my choices too,

dont be melodramatic and tell me that you will die without me, what nonsense is that, behave your age, this is no cinema and we are not actors.

what do you mean by accept my love, isnt that supposed to be a 2 way thing, if i dont see you like that, then it means that i am not in love with you, and it cannot just happen like that, who are you to define my choices for me.

anyway i am disgusted with this sort of outburst from you, you seem to have lost all connection with reality, take a break and get a life asvin.

please stop trying to contact me also, its really not nice, i dont like to be hounded like this by you.

 
At 4:16 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

My dear darling
Without you I am dangling
I am coming back
On the railway track
In a red train
With a chest pain
Because of love
I am your dove
If I marry you now
Your mother will burn me in a stove
Life is a strain
I have a leg sprain
Your dream is in vain
In the rain
I had a dream
Of eating icecream
With you in a park
When it is not really dark
You are my zombie
I am your honeybee
The train is coming soon
In the afternoon
Come to me my husband
We'll elope from the bus stand
In a flight
With a plight
We will never fight
On who will fly the kite
In the moonlight
This I write in the night
I will always be in your sight
Hope I am right.

 
At 4:36 PM, Blogger Aswin Kini said...

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At 4:57 PM, Blogger abhilash warrier said...

aswin,

though you have a long time to reach poetry... but your feelings are genuine for this girl.

and what matters in the end is not the words, but what you felt while you wrote them.

andhra girl, whoever you are, you do have a good sense of humor. but, maybe you can use it somewhere else than hitting it against a growing boy. let him be.

and aswin, please don't write out such personal stuff (not calling it a poem) in public as the girl you love may not like it. the words you wrote sound very desperate and adds pressure on her.

 
At 4:55 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Aswin, good poem.

Actually, do u know about the provision to delete comments that seem rather sadistic?
Believe me, these ppl are wholesome sadists

 
At 11:22 PM, Blogger Lavanya said...

hello!! that lavanya is not me!!! I havent been blogging in a long time and hell I am committed! dont know who is using my name and btw, you are younger than me and as rule I never go for younger men;-) good luck

 
At 6:19 PM, Blogger Aswin Kini said...

HI Lavanya, thanks for the clarification , well by the way ,i found out who the mischief makers or shall i say creative thinkers, are. OK thanks anyway bye and do keep visiting :-)

 
At 10:18 AM, Blogger Aswin Kini said...

Thanks Nk for your comments

 
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